Way up high, sleeping softly on the clouds are thousands of snow fairies. They rest peacefully until it gets so cold, they wake up to their whole bodies shivering. The shaking of their arms causes their wands to produce thousands of sparkling snowflakes which fall all the way down to earth, which allows children to play in snow.
Let me know what you two think. I think the language is simple enough, I don't think the ending is very strong.... and additions? ways it could be better?
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